Gentlemen,
Here is the site I promised you. Please post your stories here, and feel free to make comments. Please keep in mind, while you are making comments, consider the basic elements (Character, Setting, Problem, Solution) of a story we discussed in the class. Please also look at themes and conflicts, and post your suggestions to improve the stories. Another aspect that you should consider is 'connotation,' carefully look at the vocabulary, and suggest synonyms that can create a more dramatic effect.
